Tuesday, May 5, 2020
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Hi Brooklyn, yes I did enjoy the work very much! I love the photos in the backgrounds and also the way you have explained yourself shows you have a great understanding of the text. I'm glad you thought the story was 10/10 and it was a great story for your age group. This will be a great journal of all of your wonderful learning. I look forward to part 2
ReplyDeleteExcellent Brooklyn! You working so hard and creating such interesting slide decks. You found some great synonyms of words. I think your addition of the story is fabulous, because it is so descriptive. Well done!
ReplyDeleteTino pai tou mahi ano Brooklyn! I also love the piece of writing you added into the story. You have imagined, and then put together, wonderful words to describe how he was feeling about his children. Do you know the Maori name for the fantail?
ReplyDeleteHi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteI certainly did enjoy reading your slides. All you word activity work was really well done, and I especially enjoyed reading your additions on slide number 9, it added more detail and it painted a picture in my mind . Well done Brooklyn.